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Choice
May 31, 2007 1:37:15 GMT 1
Post by Zeniro on May 31, 2007 1:37:15 GMT 1
Choice
Stand your ground and fight, Turn away and run. You've got yourself a choice, But you're only taking one.
Which one do you take, As you look me in the eye. One choice is a mistake... Once choice is suicide.
Time ticks away, The sweat drips from your brow. Do you run, do you stay? Make your choices now.
Don't freeze up with fear, Don't try to compromise. The decision is clear, Both end in your demise.
Fight or flight is useless, Your fate is already bound. I'll take pleasure in the process... Of beating you into the ground.
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Choice
May 31, 2007 1:53:17 GMT 1
Post by Kyukaku on May 31, 2007 1:53:17 GMT 1
Ah, seems like forever since I've read a Zeniro poem.
I specifically found the second stanza interesting. Eye and Suicide don't exaclty rhyme, but they still have similiar sounds. What I found about that, is that it gives you a familiar, yet uncertain feeling, which seems quite similiar to feelings you'd have of making such a choice as the poem suggests.
I don't know if it was purposeful, or something coincidental. Its a small detail, but I picked up on it and it really catches my attention.
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