Post by dante on Mar 19, 2007 3:18:21 GMT 1
Well for this first post I am only going to be putting up two poems at the moment. I don't have any other ones that are even close to decent to put up and these just barely pass. Regardless, if you could, read them and tell me what you think and how I could possibly improve. I will get another one up l
What Is Love?
What is that thing we identify as love?
Is it a feeling that comes from above?
Could it be something made to comfort?
Or is it meant to be for utter discomfort?
Who can truly say what love is as an emotion
If anyone tried to define it, that'd be a commotion
Because love is an emotion that can't be defined
And is a feeling that can never be truly confined
Some people say love is a feeling that can't be tampered
While others say it can easily be destroyed and hampered
Who are the ones that are correct and those who are wrong?
Who thinks that they have all been lying to us all along?
Because in the end for everyone love is something different
And isn't easy to attain, nor is it a gift that is indifferent
It feels different for every single person that walks on Earth
It isn't something that is handed away for what it's worth
Some people take life times to find out what that feeling is
Though I think I know one thing that anyone in love does
Which is do whatever it takes to protect their special person
And do their best to make sure that their situation won't worsen
Though it isn't nearly as simple as that, love is complex
It is more than just a physical action, it's more than sex
It is an emotion that will gush out, it can't be held back
You look past all their flaws no matter what they lack
You feel a pain in your chest but it makes you smile warmly
You feel awe-stricken when they are just acting normally
You feel weightless, as if you are floating on the clouds aimlessly
You feel you can tell them anything about yourself shamelessly
That's what I think love is and I won't ever take that back in my life
No matter what happens, even if my throat is in the path of a knife
I will never go back on what I truly believe what is the emotion of love
Something that will fly endlessly like a majestic and pure white dove
...That's what I know love is.
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JKD is so much more
JKD is just a mixture of martial arts
Is what some believe in their hearts
But for me and a lot of people it is more
It prepares you for more than just war
I believe it's a a straight and narrow path for one to take
Even if your muscles are sore and your bones always ache
It helps you stay focused on what's important and true
And can be practiced by any who work hard at it, even you
You don't have to be nearly as fast as Bruce Lee
Or as strong as the invicible Greek God Hercules
You just need an iron will and a fiery determination
And be able to take a quick and painful combination
Each day you train, each day you work harder and harder
Your breaths tend to get lighter and you grow far stronger
The fists slamming on the bag that howls loudly in anguish
Your fists speaking a foreign and unknown second language
That feeling of exhaustion that makes your heart race
You believe could put a toothy grin on many a face
That feeling gives you a rush that isn't easy to attain
And is extremely difficult to find it and make it maintain
JKD teaches you the most important thing that you could know
Is that despite what difficulties hit you keep on going and don't slow
Never allowing yourself to be easily defeated and completely render
So you keep on fighting through any obstacles and never surrender
What Is Love?
What is that thing we identify as love?
Is it a feeling that comes from above?
Could it be something made to comfort?
Or is it meant to be for utter discomfort?
Who can truly say what love is as an emotion
If anyone tried to define it, that'd be a commotion
Because love is an emotion that can't be defined
And is a feeling that can never be truly confined
Some people say love is a feeling that can't be tampered
While others say it can easily be destroyed and hampered
Who are the ones that are correct and those who are wrong?
Who thinks that they have all been lying to us all along?
Because in the end for everyone love is something different
And isn't easy to attain, nor is it a gift that is indifferent
It feels different for every single person that walks on Earth
It isn't something that is handed away for what it's worth
Some people take life times to find out what that feeling is
Though I think I know one thing that anyone in love does
Which is do whatever it takes to protect their special person
And do their best to make sure that their situation won't worsen
Though it isn't nearly as simple as that, love is complex
It is more than just a physical action, it's more than sex
It is an emotion that will gush out, it can't be held back
You look past all their flaws no matter what they lack
You feel a pain in your chest but it makes you smile warmly
You feel awe-stricken when they are just acting normally
You feel weightless, as if you are floating on the clouds aimlessly
You feel you can tell them anything about yourself shamelessly
That's what I think love is and I won't ever take that back in my life
No matter what happens, even if my throat is in the path of a knife
I will never go back on what I truly believe what is the emotion of love
Something that will fly endlessly like a majestic and pure white dove
...That's what I know love is.
-------------------------------------------------
JKD is so much more
JKD is just a mixture of martial arts
Is what some believe in their hearts
But for me and a lot of people it is more
It prepares you for more than just war
I believe it's a a straight and narrow path for one to take
Even if your muscles are sore and your bones always ache
It helps you stay focused on what's important and true
And can be practiced by any who work hard at it, even you
You don't have to be nearly as fast as Bruce Lee
Or as strong as the invicible Greek God Hercules
You just need an iron will and a fiery determination
And be able to take a quick and painful combination
Each day you train, each day you work harder and harder
Your breaths tend to get lighter and you grow far stronger
The fists slamming on the bag that howls loudly in anguish
Your fists speaking a foreign and unknown second language
That feeling of exhaustion that makes your heart race
You believe could put a toothy grin on many a face
That feeling gives you a rush that isn't easy to attain
And is extremely difficult to find it and make it maintain
JKD teaches you the most important thing that you could know
Is that despite what difficulties hit you keep on going and don't slow
Never allowing yourself to be easily defeated and completely render
So you keep on fighting through any obstacles and never surrender