Post by John Smith on Feb 4, 2007 20:18:16 GMT 1
A creepy feeling:
Massive panic as the students around me flee, run for their lives through the double doors of Rosborg Gymnasium. I am a part of that crowd that is running, squessing myself through the doors I look back at the building. It wasn't the building I recognised as my school. It was far taller, much more cold, it was as the darkness inside crept out through the windows and made it even darker. For I could not see past the third store, from there, I was looking a large black void. I was trapped in a massive orb of blackness. Looking around, the people were gone and all I could see was parked cars and a car pulling over, I recognised the driver and jumped through the sidewindow. Looking at the backseat I saw another friend.
[-[-]-] Black out...? [-[-]-]
The burning wreck of a car, only two of us left, the third mysteriously gone. We were alone in the streets of this cold grey city, the black orb still hindering my sight. As we walked away from the wreck, I felt something vibrate in my pockets. Reaching down I picked up the phone, it was my dad.
"Hey Emil. Where are you at? We have been loo- [screaming in the background] where are you?..." [The line goes dead]
I look horrified down at the cellphone as I drop it. Looking back up, my friend was gone and I don't know where he headed off for... or what took him away...?
[-[-]-] Black out...? [-[-]-]
Breathing hectic. My legs are sore and I can only see the top of the wall I am trying to climb over, my hands on the edge of it as I try to pull myself up. I turn my head as I hear a sound... Or think I hear a sound? ... As my head has turned. A half decayed hand is coming straight for my face as the unknown being exclaims a loud bone rotten breath.
[-[-]-] ... The end...? [-[-]-]
I have no idea what the creature was, I have no idea what happened to my two friends, my dad, and the rest of my family together with him. Neither do I know what my fate was, because at an alternate place. I wake up with my eyes wide and my mouth hanging half open. Looking directly at a hand advancing for my face. I tried to scream, but the words wouldn't leave my mouth. A moment later, I realise it is but my brother, in there to wake me up.
[-[-]-] This was a dream... nightmare? I had, except the last part which was reality. It is by far the worst I've ever had. The uncertainty and sudden disappearance of people, the phone call, everything leading up to the climax, where I... die? or... survive? I do not know what happens after... and right now, I just felt like sharing it with you... [-[-]-]
[Every 'Black out...? = A jump in my dream as I saw it...]
Massive panic as the students around me flee, run for their lives through the double doors of Rosborg Gymnasium. I am a part of that crowd that is running, squessing myself through the doors I look back at the building. It wasn't the building I recognised as my school. It was far taller, much more cold, it was as the darkness inside crept out through the windows and made it even darker. For I could not see past the third store, from there, I was looking a large black void. I was trapped in a massive orb of blackness. Looking around, the people were gone and all I could see was parked cars and a car pulling over, I recognised the driver and jumped through the sidewindow. Looking at the backseat I saw another friend.
[-[-]-] Black out...? [-[-]-]
The burning wreck of a car, only two of us left, the third mysteriously gone. We were alone in the streets of this cold grey city, the black orb still hindering my sight. As we walked away from the wreck, I felt something vibrate in my pockets. Reaching down I picked up the phone, it was my dad.
"Hey Emil. Where are you at? We have been loo- [screaming in the background] where are you?..." [The line goes dead]
I look horrified down at the cellphone as I drop it. Looking back up, my friend was gone and I don't know where he headed off for... or what took him away...?
[-[-]-] Black out...? [-[-]-]
Breathing hectic. My legs are sore and I can only see the top of the wall I am trying to climb over, my hands on the edge of it as I try to pull myself up. I turn my head as I hear a sound... Or think I hear a sound? ... As my head has turned. A half decayed hand is coming straight for my face as the unknown being exclaims a loud bone rotten breath.
[-[-]-] ... The end...? [-[-]-]
I have no idea what the creature was, I have no idea what happened to my two friends, my dad, and the rest of my family together with him. Neither do I know what my fate was, because at an alternate place. I wake up with my eyes wide and my mouth hanging half open. Looking directly at a hand advancing for my face. I tried to scream, but the words wouldn't leave my mouth. A moment later, I realise it is but my brother, in there to wake me up.
[-[-]-] This was a dream... nightmare? I had, except the last part which was reality. It is by far the worst I've ever had. The uncertainty and sudden disappearance of people, the phone call, everything leading up to the climax, where I... die? or... survive? I do not know what happens after... and right now, I just felt like sharing it with you... [-[-]-]
[Every 'Black out...? = A jump in my dream as I saw it...]
