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Post by xae on Dec 23, 2006 9:35:43 GMT 1
Meaning of Life
Lost in dark and despair....
Why is life so unfair?
So much pain.
It can drive anyone insane.
Doesn't matter if your wounds mend.
Because you're going to die in the end.
Life is too short to savor, but life is too long to waste.
So do what you want in life now, and make great haste.
Because at any moment you can die.
And when you look back in heaven or hell, only thing you can do is sigh.
Strive
Beaten down and weak.
How can you possibly get the prize you seek.
You just lay there like a doll.
Bought and thrown away in the mall.
Stop crying and rise.
Ignore all of those lies.
Keep on fighting and stay alive.
Because I'm saying you must continue to strive.
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Post by Dante Williams on Dec 23, 2006 18:43:00 GMT 1
Great poem! Really!
But when you read it it feels, ummmm..... It feels kind of out of sync.
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Post by xae on Dec 25, 2006 0:43:06 GMT 1
Wind
Wandering and free.
Goes where ever it wants as you can see.
A weak breeze and a strong gust.
That is the winds moods including blood lust.
Roaming the world without a care.
Living a life like that would be beyond fair.
But all we can do is let the wind blow.
And do not let our sadness show...
Christmas
The day for joy and gifts.
Coal is given for unneeded fits.
Brought to you by the fat man in the suit.
Giving you all those gifts, he must have alot of loot.
Carolers singing to their heart's content.
Oblivious that their lives could end at any moment.
A curse or a blessing Christmas is.
Seeing the champagne in your glass fizz.
Enjoy this day well.
It might be the last you hear the jingle of a bell.
Gift
What is in it?
Could it be a portable chair where you can sit?
Or is it something that is more great?
Maybe some trick with bait!
Shake it once maybe twice.
Maybe its your pet mice?
Take off the bow and paper with ease.
But don't make yourself look like a sleaze.
Enjoy your gift no matter what.
Or the giver might give you a cut.
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Post by xae on Dec 25, 2006 4:59:23 GMT 1
Winter
Freezing and cold.
Walking through the blizzard is bold.
But makes you a fool.
And winter's tool.
Snowballs and snowmen are made.
But soon the sun will make it all fade.
Enjoy the winter while you can.
Because soon you'll be using that fan.
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Post by Dante Williams on Dec 29, 2006 18:56:52 GMT 1
Woohoo!
Great job Xae, you're making a lot of progress!
PS. I liked 'Gift' a lot!
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Post by xae on Dec 30, 2006 2:51:42 GMT 1
*sigh* your the only one who comments my poems  Think Think about what you will gain. Like an umbrella for the mysterious rain. Think about what you will lose. Like those expensive shoes. Think about the ones you love. But don't do it in a crowded place, or you'll get a shove. Think about the ones you hate. Because they might be a big part in your fate. Think before you act. Because that isnt just a saying, it is a fact. |
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Post by Dante Williams on Jan 5, 2007 23:29:08 GMT 1
PS. I'm sorry about that  But your poems are good. The best one yet!!! It's really awesome! Keep up the good work! Why are you a 'guest'? You get banned or something? |
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Post by Odin Reeves on Jan 5, 2007 23:30:27 GMT 1
He deleted his account. Xae no longer exists.
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Post by Director Troutman on Jan 5, 2007 23:35:29 GMT 1
He deleted his account. Xae no longer exists. He remade his account as Taru. |
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Post by Odin Reeves on Jan 5, 2007 23:39:49 GMT 1
I'm aware of such Liam. Despite not having Mod-ly powers, I'm still just as perceptive as always. In fact, I probably knew he was Taru before most others, seeing as he asked me to review his bio.
Yeah, so did anyone else think I was a mod? If so, PM me with an answer.
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Post by Director Troutman on Jan 5, 2007 23:46:17 GMT 1
I'm aware of such Liam. Despite not having Mod-ly powers, I'm still just as perceptive as always. In fact, I probably knew he was Taru before most others, seeing as he asked me to review his bio. Yeah, so did anyone else think I was a mod? If so, PM me with an answer. I was actually making the point for DANTE, Odin..... |
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Post by Dante Williams on Jan 6, 2007 1:23:35 GMT 1
Thank ya'll, I was just wondering...
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But your poems are good.
